Oh God
when you were warming me up for the jump
I was restless that how would I endure without you
however you were confident of my winning
and you were correct
when I jumped from the paradise
there were the hands of my new parents
down on this earth
ready to make me feel the rhapsody once again
Oh God...
Author notes
Based on the picture
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2376753
A contest entry
- new life.... new start..... ONE RULE by lexy23.
420 points, ended November 7, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I live with one beloved
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There can be no better joy than the arrival of a new born. The new life brings lot of meanings to many lives like it gives a promotion to dad,mom,grandpa,gradmas etc......
A beautiful write worth reading many times.
All the best for contest.
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oh how lovely, a poem that gave me a life to read.
thanks so much for entering. xxxx -
excellent
how well you have depicted the transition! This is full of positive energy. Congrats and best regards.
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Precious!!
Beautiful piece You have penned my Friend and
love the emotions You brought forward
The images tug at the heartstrings
Thank You for sharing Your Spirit!
Keep that quill dancing Sweet Soul
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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This is so comforting- to know it is true.
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Everlasting arms of love...
Un poeme de beaute...a perfect poem for this image and so lovely a spiritual journey as I have ever read. Well done. Peace and good luck in the contest. Rhonda
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