My love I cannot wait ...
the day is drawing near
we do not pause or hesitate..
our bond no doubt or fear.
For in my heart there stood a place
not filled by kids..nor fun..
it was reserved just for your face
and burns hotter than the sun
They say we get but one chance in life
to find that special one
and I believe that must be right
for above him there are none
The fates carved out our place in stone
the blowing wind our only friend
for she whispered to him when all alone
and the wind brought her voice to him
For he tells a story of how he heard
her small voice call to him
whispers on wings from the birds
he hears it far but dim
Then one day the little voice
from far away...now lives
within a virtual world of noise
his heart to her he gives..
She takes it knowing he's the one
who's been listening to her song
their love never to be undone
both have waited for so long
Now our day is coming love
and words cannot descibe
the thanks givin to all above
for making me your Wife..
A contest entry
- I WANT LOVE!!!!!! by Breaking Inside.
450 points, ended November 9, 2007, 23 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
comments are always welcome thank you
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This was so touching! the emotions were so strong and powerful! i loved this so much!!!
Your metaphors painted stunning and gorgeous pictures in mind!!! It was simply brilliant! keep writing and congratz on ur bronze! well deserved!
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AHHHH...So sweet and loving..I really enjoyed this piece and it really made me a bit envious of the lovers in this piece. I thought I found the love of my life twice. But now their fire is but a flicker in the dark. great write
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I very much appreciate
the nice comments about My poem thank you so much for allowing Me to touch your heart.
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this is great!!! i love it! good luck
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better late than never..
I wanted to come and tell you thank you for your comments and thank you for the little bronze trophy that now graces My page ..one down thousands to go
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