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Empty Spaces

empty spaces
so silent, bare
yet filled
with lovely thoughts
of you

A contest entry

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  • leander Moderators member
    December 4, 2007

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    Ooh, this is a rather simply, yet beautiful and tender snippet you have entered in this contest - and I like it
    thank you for entering the contest with this and I wish you the best of luck!
    Leander


  • Namita
    November 8, 2007
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    Sweetly said.


  • Malabu
    November 5, 2007

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    empty seems so cold

    till thoughts of someone special...warm the air...
    love's flame
    ignites
    suddenly the this place is full
    so be my thoughts to your few words of love...it's a wonderful write girl...
    Mal


  • crimsondew
    November 5, 2007
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    So beautiful

    love your take..All the best!


  • Asdzaa Nadleehe
    November 5, 2007

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    aww..This is really wonderful...
    So many great writes to read this morning...smiles
    Best wishes with this entry..
    Peace
    ~A~


  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 5, 2007

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    Very sweet and heartfelt, wonderful take on the prompt.
    Soft and soothing flow of wonderment.

    Best to you!

    Love,
    mystic

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