indescribable sensations,
permeates body & soul
unspoken are the words,
yet the feeling is found
captured forever,
in a velvety touch
Author notes
the most beautiful thing in music is silence
as pause is in poetry
A contest entry
- 22 words or less - 3 days by Namita.
300 points, ended November 8, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Understand?
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Ah Yes!
There is romance and sensuality written in these few lines. You have caressed the spirit with tender paint stokes from your painter's brush. Lovely work!
Much Love Always ♥
Renee
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loved
Great short read. Love your work dear. -
Wonderful
Very creative and well done. Music sings in your words.
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Excellent delivery in such few words..you KNOW how I love the few words and this style fits perfectly...very powerful emotional write....Good luck in the contest!
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See, Pause adds a lot to the effect.
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Darlin,
This is beautiful!
Very wonderfully and tenderly beautifully written!
Wish you the best in this contest! 
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Wowzers!!
Beautiful verse You have penned Sweet One and with images that take the reader on a euphoric journey in 22 words or less
Thank You for sharing Your Heart~
and Gift of Inspiration
Woooooooooooooooo Hooooooooooooo
Keep that quill dancing my Friend
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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This is a really beautful poem.
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wow. this is simply beautiful...I truly loved your piece here. so much is said and portrayed through your lines-
the structure was great, and the ending was just simply beautiful. your work is just magic! this is surely a winner!!!
and your author notes were amazing. just like your piece. great work!!! best of luck in the contest!
love,
char
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I really loved the idea behind this... Beautifully penned topic and excellent imagery that reacts with many many sense... places us somewheres special... Excellent.
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