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The setting sun of life

They spent the cream of their lives,
Trying to make their children stable;
And as the setting sun arrives,
All they need is someone to be there.

All they need is someone beside,
To be there when a tear drops;
To be there when grief strikes,
And make their days brighter.

All they need from you is a smile,
That is more than priceless a gift;
That'll make them walk more than a mile,
And wipe off all their grievances.

To see that smile on their faces
Is in itself a priceless bliss,
But to create those smiles in the places,
Is an eternal act of kindness...

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  • Celticmoon
    December 27, 2007

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    Sorry for the delay in judging; and thank you for taking the time to enter. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!