In music of silence
guided by the hand
that speaks
a voice echoes his soul
while all in the world,
has vanished.
A contest entry
- 22 words or less - 3 days by Namita.
300 points, ended November 8, 2007, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful.
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such magnifiscent beauty in few astounding words of hope. well done xx many blessings always xxx
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"a voice echoes his soul"
Very beautiful, pause does bring silence for such echoes....love this, good luck in the contest
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Agreed that in that paused moment of reflecting. Sheer essence of flavor is relished.
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So mush said with so few words~ that is skill. Beautiful.
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Beautifully done. Lovely words for the prompt, so softly said. Nicely flow and soothing to the soul.
Well done in it's brevity.
Power in words.
Bes to you!
Love,
mystic
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very few words to express the inner souls emotions? good job...Mal
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