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Caressed by the Wind

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caressed by the wind
spirit of a playful child
outside of the walls

 

 

 

 

 

 

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A contest entry

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  • Dalaney gold member
    November 18, 2007

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    Well put, Poet...
    Your interpretation
    is most fitting...

    Love, Lane

  • Arzab
    November 5, 2007

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    Beautiful write. This piece made me think of how some people, though they may be grown up, may still have a sense of having fun and be a bit of a child at heart. Good luck in the contest.


  • Amera gold member
    November 5, 2007

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    Beautifil. This haiku has a meaning only I understand. Where did the wall go I wonder.

    Love,
    Amera♥


    • PerVirtuous gold member
      November 5, 2007

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      I believe they used the blocks to build a coffee shop where poetry readings will be held daily. All are invited. Some of the poetry is even good. I think others will identify with this as well. Glad you did, though. It makes it very special.
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