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Still

To create
musical
form
shape
          only one
          right
          shape
                bottom
                of sea
                corals.

        now
        gentle
        rest
        restored
        at beach
                  coast
                  of poem.

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Prompt: the most beautiful thing in music is silence
as pause is in poetry.

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  • Namita
    November 8, 2007
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    Lovely imagery.


  • crimsondew
    November 5, 2007
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    So pretty..Love the imagery..All the best!