Scarce moments
of vacant noise,
to rest beating soul
like a calm lake
at dusk,
before being showered
by moonlight.
Author notes
prompt:
the most beautiful thing in music is silence
as pause is in poetry--22 words or less.
In a list
A contest entry
- 22 words or less - 3 days by Namita.
300 points, ended November 8, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is really lovely and pretty.
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Glad you like it!
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This is very pretty and relaxing thank you for sharing this with me.Goodluck to you in the contest.Best wishes and much love
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I am glad you found it soothing...serves my purpose well...
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I like the Image here. I love to sit upon a dock and watch the sky reflected as the day ends. It is just that
- silent
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Glad you enjoyed it and are able to relate to it!
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