Inner reflections
penned.
Inhale the sense
in timelessness.
Drift along
discovering in
solitary significance.
Breathe
in wonder
outside
your universe.
Author notes
Prompt-
the most beautiful thing in music is silence
as pause is in poetry
A contest entry
- 22 words or less - 3 days by Namita.
300 points, ended November 8, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very beautiful penning.
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Magnificent!!
Wonderful weaving of words Sweet One
Love the images~~breathe in wonder...
Magnificent piece based on the prompt!
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!!
Keep that quill dancing
Best wishes to You in the contest my Friend
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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I love this and my favorite stanza is "Inhale the sense/of timelessness!" Good luck in the contest!
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Beautiful as always, strong and wonderful flow. Great words written for the prompt and so strong in their brevity.
Best to you!
Love
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