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her silver baubles

her silver baubles
left on the window- ledge...
brief shower

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  • micol
    November 9, 2007

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    "Baubles" works well here...pretty but transient, inviting but evanescent, momentary beauty that will inevitably fade. Just like rain.

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    November 7, 2007

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    Silver baubles, what a beautiful picture you have painted in my mind.... glorious it is to be blessed with something as beautiful as the rain

    Karen


  • azure85 gold member
    November 5, 2007

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    her silver baubles
    left on the window- ledge...
    brief shower

    What a pretty set of images, and a good AHA. Thank you so much for this rainy day haiku!