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"My Castle In The Air"

I  am  not  alone  indeed
As accompanied by sweet dreams
Of going in the  fairy  lands
An' eating lovely choclate creams

In the land of my desires
Oh! I do laugh an' cry
For they're my whole world
An' if they broke I might die

I'ave build my golden castle
In which I sleep at night
With the wishes of my heart
An' with my love an' delight

With my charming fairy friends
My  tears oh! I  do  share
An' for my joys an' laughters
I protect"My Castle In The Air"

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  • JCSuperstar
    November 7, 2007

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    this is beautiful. i like the last verse especially because it shows how much people love being at home and why. does that make sense? anyhow, good work.