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Mt Mary










she sat on a loney bench
reluctantly
awating him in the church
holding bountiful of lilies
that matched her short floral midi,
hair neatly woven in a ponytail
and skin having a Sunday essence

he popped up twenty mins late
still showing up last night’s evil smile
whispering a tease in her hair
softy,

"weren’t you jealous?"

"really, was I?"

throwing fireballs at him
through embarrassed eyes

there weren’t any commitments between them

yet,
he held his ears
like an innocent puppy
spilling a sorry
between their cushioned moments
helping her to light the candles
in the glow of forgiveness
for a very unknown reason



Author notes

Mt Mary is a very beautiful old church in Bandra, Mumbai

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  • Puppydog gold member
    November 8, 2007

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    LOVELY!!!

    Yes, when a beautiful setting is before you and you see your flame the passion comes easy and true.