baby don't start talking this is how it's gonna go
listen to me dreaming coz there's things you need to know
you've lived here for so damn long it's hard to turn your back
we're leaving right this moment and we're going down that track
we'll take just what we're wearing and we'll leave this world behind
you and me just running like we're running out of time
just four wheels beneath us and the open road ahead
if you don't wanna hear it then turn round and go to bed
we're gonna hit that road and drive and drive
with nothing but the moon and our pale headlights
and an open road
and all our dreams
gonna take on fate
with twin high-beams
we'll carry on till morning, till the sun begins to rise
then we'll race that ball of fire 'cross the pale desert skys
desert hills and desert roads and quiet desert towns
nothings out of limits with this freedom that we've found
we'll be up in uluru to watch the sun retreat
gazing at the country laid out way beneath our feet.
lying in each others arms as stars begin to show
if none of this is sounding good then honey let me know
we're gonna hit that road and drive and drive
with nothing but the moon and our pale headlights
and an open road
and all our dreams
gonna take on fate
with twin high-beams
every time i see your eyes i lose myself to dreams
thoughts of all that we could have, and all that we could be
every time i hold you close i feel so damn alive
but everytime we have to part, well something in me dies
so come away with me tonight, i'll never leave again
you and me , we're free at last, it never has to end
so not a word, just make you're move. get in now and we'll go
or wave goodbye and let me leave.
come on now
let me know
we're gonna hit that road and drive and drive
with nothing but the moon and our pale headlights
and an open road
and all our dreams
gonna take on fate
with twin high-beams
Please tell me what you think
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*cheers*
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IM IN LOVE!!!
with your words<3
Haleluya my heart's singing there's nothing you can't do!
Let me tell you babe, I knew that special something about you..
Now dont you ever change I love your writing the way it is
And I swear if I lived near you I'd kiss you just for this!
Awe-inspiring, my friend, whoever you were thinking of while writing this is the luckiest girl alive right about now!! Great work, this is by far a breath of fresh air from all those cliche' love writes!
Keep it up^_~
~Hannah -
heh she out did me on the length of comment
*sigh*
heh this is the 3rd time i've read it =p
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It wasn't intentional... It's just the song is so pretteh. And I luff it. =D
You got a mention in my comment though. Yay.
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I'm not quite sure what to say. I'm just absolutely blown away by this poem, so on my first note - congratulations on writing an amazingly awesome poem Gorgeous. But yessem. You should be proud. You made the Devil speechless. =D
On a slightly more serious level, I absolutely adore what you have written. It's pretteh. And now I think it is pushing towards being my absolute favourite of all the poems you have written. It is so not fair. I want all your talent. Maybe I'll just cut out your brain and steal if for myself... But tempting as that it, then you wouldn't be the same as you are now, and that would just suck. Yessem.
I think my favourite part of the poem is the same as Bek Bek's. (heart you!) Especially that first stanza;
every time i see your eyes i lose myself to dreams
thoughts of all that we could have, and all that we could be
every time i hold you close i feel so damn alive
but everytime we have to part, well something in me dies
I just love it. Probably cause it is so heart felt and reminds me of alot of stuff.
This poem is absolutely amazing, I love how it deals with wanting to get away from everything with the one you love, and living life freely. I wish that I could do that sometimes. The repetition of the 'chorus' along with the words of the poem make a startling impact on those who read it, so thanks Seej for writting something this profound and sharing it with us. =D
But yes. This is an amazing poem / song thing SeeJ. Awesome. I don't think I can say that enough to give you an idea of just how much I love it.
Ish Love it.
Ish Heart you.
Muchly Love,
Me.
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i fuckin love it, there's just somethin about the rhyme scheme that just strikes me. Not to mention the freedom of leaving a place that you've lived all your life and getting away with that person. The freedom of traveling and being able to go where ever you wanna go. I was thinkin bout writing a poem similar to this, beings i'm headin up north next weekend for a little break. i love it, it's brilliant. nice work
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heh
uluru
its good.
Flo.
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oh wow. this is lovely, i really like it. nice work see.j!!!! ... kept me readin from strt to end
... u always do.hope ur quite well... cheers!
madhu.
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I'ma come
for sure
i wouldnt miss it
for the world
i love this part;
every time i see your eyes i lose myself to dreams
thoughts of all that we could have, and all that we could be
every time i hold you close i feel so damn alive
but everytime we have to part, well something in me dies
so come away with me tonight, i'll never leave again
you and me , we're free at last, it never has to end
so not a word, just make you're move. get in now and we'll go
or wave goodbye and let me leave.
it's completely awesome.
well worth the wait
the whole thing. brilliant.
*huggles*
i have to work again tomorrow night
so i wont be on msn... AGAIN
i love youu
miss you
cant wait till friday... maybe then we can do this little trip you have planned out in your AWESOME poem?
*nods*
yeap =]
love you
bekatoryy
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Take me With YOU!!
Lol. hmm. endless fate driven road trip. yess pleaase. lol. this is awesomely written cameron, with a great idea behind it. maybe one of my favourites of yours, although theres too many of those to count. wow. is all i have to say. it's so great.
keep the 16th free for drinky drink for my graduation.
love you long times
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sweet...
this is awesome, love it =)
definitely worth the wait =)
awshum =) seriously =)
love the repeating chorus bit... awesome...
definitely great =)
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This is awesome dude.
For something of this size you actually managed to keep my attention.
Love it.
Keep up the good work.
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