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Of facets and semblance

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Multi-faceted image
aglow in your panels;


Eyes open-
                (closes) and,
perfectly [transparent].


A God of pretenses
with nicotine eyes.






~

Author notes

Written November 5, 2007

Prompt: Nicotine Eyes

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    November 15, 2007

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    this is beautiful sir, you command the language so well, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it thanks for entering


  • AshliiAsphyxiation
    November 6, 2007

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    God of pretenses
    with nicotine eyes

    dear gossh.
    this is amazing.
    that part just blew me away.
    Lets think of it this way.
    If this poem was a girl
    i would of bought her dinner AND breakfast by now.
    x]

    xx