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Dancing With The Dragon

The first time when we held hands, you didn't love me.
I wished you did, but to no avail.
Was that a mistake? No.

When I left her silhouette we found each other again.
God! Love could never be better.
Could you tame me? No.

Our relationship has always been under construction.
Although not tamable, you still can control me.
Will you stop dancing with this dragon? No.

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Mmm, I'm hungry now..

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  • Dalaney gold member
    November 12, 2007

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    very interesting take on this
    title. I like it. Thank you
    for your time and talent, Poet.

    Love, Lane


  • EmanonTragedy
    November 4, 2007
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    Hmmm...

    You are a random fellow.