Today is the day
You grow older by a year
So as the memories remain
You can wipe away a tear.
Memories of childhood
Good friends, and good times
Though some may disappear
Your true friends will always be there.
So Happy Birthday to you
Many wishes I hope come true
Sometimes dreams and prayers to
Just remember this day is just for you.
A contest entry
- Lasts just today by Rita Krocha.
600 points, ended November 5, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Warrior-Eagle's Birthday(plz join) by xorandomxo.
600 points, ended November 27, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Plz rem. I wrote this when I was 12 and now I'm 27 it was the 8th poem I ever wrote.
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you deserved the cup
this was great
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VERY GOOD
good luck in the contest -
Simply beautiful
The simplicity of the piece was awesome... The clarity is typical of a child's innocent, uncluttered view of life. Great write!!! -
Nice
me likey. its short but gets to the point.
Memories of childhood
Good friends, and good times
Though some may disappear
Your true friends will always be there.
THis is really true and well jsut brilliant
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Oh Wow Very Nice! I love it. Simple but true. A pleasure reading it. Thank you for entering!
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