Flickers of light
Words insignificantly spoken
Deep rooted within the heart
Begotten emotions truly understood
How could I say
In words that never carry
Emotions of love
That I have for you
Late night thoughts
Remembrance of the times
Spend in such sweet serenity
My heart melts for your everlasting care
How I adore you
How there is such a yearning
For your touch
Such adoration of the mind
Such favor of the body
Such idolatry of the soul
How I wish to indulge myself
With your intellectual depth
How I wish to intoxicate myself
With your tender aroma
How I wish to luxuriate myself
With you vigilant warmth
A contest entry
- Let Me Feel Romanced by stavykm.
800 points, ended November 14, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Amazing
It's pretty amazing ...
I think you need to tell her, so that you aren't so confused any more. -
Awwwww.....Brandon this is amazing. Who's the lucky girl? I can only wish that one day, hopefully soon, that you will find the lady of your dreams. That she will fill every need in your heart, and you in hers.
I heart you!
Britt
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No, no lucky girl. I was just writing.
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wow this is a great poem my favorite part is "Such idolatry of the soul" it made me think a lot , good luck in the contest
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Wonderful
Yes this took my breath away. What a wonderful write. Very romantic and such excellent flow of emotions moving forward to the point of intoxicating myself. Oh yes this is awesome.. Excellent write, glad you entered and best of luck in the contest, blessings Kelle Marie, stavykm and Christina
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Excellent depth and emotion in this poem. I like the rich imagery and wide variety when it comes to word usage. This is really a beautiful piece, and I definitely like your style a lot. Thanks for sharing this wonderful work. I hope to read more in the future. Keep it up!
~Elizabeth~
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this is a great poem.
my favorite part is"How I wish to indulge myself
With your intellectual depth"
thats great
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