Beauty is something not to lose
Nor to forsake or punish
Beauty is something wonderful
Beauty is something to acknowledge.
Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder
Which of course is you
Beauty is something not to lose or forget
'Cause beauty will always be in you.
In a list
A contest entry
- something beautiful by pineapple-eyes.
550 points, ended July 5, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Plz rem. I wrote this when I was 12 and now I'm 27 it was the 8th poem I ever wrote.
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wonderful
you have some really good ones from when you were younger and i really like this one, you have a way about speking from your heart and that is just one thing i love about you *hugs*
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awww that's awesome. talented even early on!
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omg
wow!
i loved it
this was so good ,
you were destined to be a poet bro
great write !
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very nice and so much talent within a young child. We only get better as we get older. Well done and thanks for sharing
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Excellant/intriguing/reflective
And just as true now as it was then. You expanded on the old saying: "Beauty is in the eye of the beholder", quite well indeed, my friend. I'm not sure who said that line first, u might want to google it and see if you can find out.
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A lovely reminder that inner beauty is what's really important ... and beauty is in the eyes of the beholder. Very nice poem for a 12 year old (now all grown up)! Enjoyed your poem ... keep on writing! ....JustBreathe
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