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Masochist

She keep's on going back for more
To feel the grief and be pain's whore

Disease ridden and paranoid
The thing that dwells inside the void

Something inhuman, a twisted soul
Who earns naught but to work for coal

She takes away for it's own sake
And often wishes not to wake

And all this with her smile worn
To laugh and joke at her own scorn

Inside she's made of blood and bone
She steals Medusa to turn to stone

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  • scottles
    November 8, 2007

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    i love this poem

    my fave lines are the last couplet:
    "Inside she's made of blood and bone
    She steals Medusa to turn to stone"
    its an amazing poem, cant wait to see u and and hang out, keep writing


  • Skawe
    November 6, 2007

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    awesome. I liked this one mucho. Especially the last two lines: it was rather clever (but then again, I speak of you )