As soon as you're born,
You love someone.
Whether you know them or not
You love them.
When you grow up,
You wander around,
Looking for someone to love,
To marry and share a family with.
But you don't have to look far,
Even if it's around the world.
For you have known this person forever.
You were destined for eachother,
It just took you a while to know it.
So just look in your heart,
And you'll find the one you love,
But even if you have to go around the world,
You know they're there,
And they're searching for you, too.
A contest entry
- Lovers... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended November 6, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For Our Upcoming Wedding by DolphinLass.
700 points, ended December 18, 2007, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Form of Love by Perfectly Imperfect.
450 points, ended January 4, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Thanks for the great well worded emotion filled entry in my contest. I love the peaceful background too. Good luck in contest and Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year too.
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This is a nice piece of writing, I like the sentiment behind it
Well done and thanks for entering x
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So just look in your heart,
And you'll find the one you love,
But even if you have to go around the world,
You know they're there,
And they're searching for you, too.
The immagery is strongly knitted and love is around
the verse which is indeed very intriguing as
well..thanks for the beautiful entry in my contest...
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that's beautiful, it was enlightening.... great work.
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