Oh my goodness is my window wide open?
Oh dear my neighbor's out with other women...
I surely hope that they didn't see me
As I was flying and telling myself to be free
Oh my goodness are they looking my way?
Oh dear...what ever will I say?
I surely hope that they didn't notice
As I was jumping and being careless.
Oh goodness why is she pointing at me?
Oh dear...why is she laughing, is something funny?
A contest entry
- Ladies....Ten Lines Or Less by Dalaney.
525 points, ended November 16, 2007, 6 entries
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Thank you so much for
entering this contest,
and for writing a very
cute and clever poem.
Love, Lane
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this makes me giggle. Not too sure what it's about, don't really think it's suppose to be about anything but it's really funny and you should've seen my face when I was reading this. I'm in a good mood. OOO we have to talk sometime soon like tomorrow!!! Um, but about the poem, very cute, very you! love it. Oh, have you read my poem that I wrote about 2 weeks ago, it's basically me in a nut shell and I think that you would agree. Anyways, gonna go since I basically just has a convo with you while commenting this awesome random piece, but hey, that's me. Gosh I'm in a happy mood. lol. ttyl. love ya!
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its for a contest...you have to go look at the picture...lol...I saw it and I was like...I have to enter in this contest...lol...its such a funny pic!
thanks for the comment deary!
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lol...good take..all the best!
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