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Haiku 55

The song the woods sings
tell a story of joy that
is rare to the us.

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  • horsecowgirl
    November 11, 2007

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    first of all you need to take the "s" off of sings in the first line. then is the "us" u.s or "us"? if just "us" then you need to try to fix that last line. take out the "the" and replace or something like that. otherwise this is a nice little earthy type haiku. i like the personification! keep up the fabulous writing!
    ~horsecowgirl~