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And I Will

This world all around me, it colors my sky
Stops on its final spin
Shadows from nature, grows into light
Never die in the end

And tell me that we belong together
Tell me you truly love me
I'll be sheltered in you, hang from your lips
Besides with heartache that you just can't see

And I will stand here forever
I'll shun out the suicide of love
And I will be here til we're older
I'll live with you, even while we're up above

Sun shines, brightly through the window
As we lie awake inside
This love's our survival, our living drug
The proof of life that will not die

And tell me that we belong together
Tell me you truly love me
I'll be sheltered in you, hang from your lips
Besides with heartache that you just can't see

And I will stand here forever
I'll shun out the suicide of love
And I will be here til we're older
I'll live with you, even while we're up above

I'm torn up, scarred up, fought my way back from the sins
Remembered all the things that you said over again.

And I will stand here forever
I'll shun out the suicide of love
And I will be here til we're older
I'll live with you, even while we're up above

~I'll live with you, even while we're up above~

Author notes

..::Lyrics inspired by the song I'LL BE by: Edwin McCain::..

http://www.sing365.com/music/lyric.nsf/I'll-Be-lyrics-Edwin-McCain/B4B23AACA37FE22F4825694B0025B733

Enjoy!

(( Option Number One ~Musically Inspired~ ))

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  • Breaking Inside
    November 5, 2007

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    wow this is very wonderful and it puts you on the spot in your mind... i love how it makes me imagine everything that is going on in the poem.... or maby that is me.


  • AutumnsFlame
    November 4, 2007

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    hmmm.... at first I though "eh...okay...boring" but then it kinda grew on me and I began to like it as the piece went on. The repeating lines really emphasize the point. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.