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Can We Get This Back?

Can we get this back?
Does it make you sad,
watching what we had crumble?

Can we get this back?
Will you show me how
to live without a doubt?

Can we get this back?
Do I try too hard
to show you what went wrong?

Can we get this back?
will we get this back,
to when we both felt free?

Please tell me what you think

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  • xTomorrowx
    February 8, 2008

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    This is so sad, and so beautiful...
    I'm liking your poetry very much...
    Great job with this one