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[ raindrops splash ]

raindrops splash
on the old tin roof
the cadence continues

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    November 7, 2007

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    You know one of my favourite things is to lay in bed and listen to the rain on a tin roof and man you have brought back some memories, goodluck in the contest

    Karen


    • Pollycheck
      November 9, 2007
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      Poetic Whisperer

      That is actually one of my favorite things to do also, but I don't even need the rain.


  • Arkbear gold member
    November 7, 2007

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    Very nice Polly ~

    I love the area of my mind which you took advantage of....the area of sound ~

     

    Lovely choice of words and imagery!

     

    Best of luck to you,

     

     

    Bear ~

    • Pollycheck
      November 8, 2007
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      Bear

      Thank you so much for your kind words. They are truly appreciated.


  • azure85 gold member
    November 4, 2007

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    raindrops splash
    on the old tin roof
    the cadence continues

    Very nice haiku, I love the use of sound within this, your AHA is great. You can hear the pounding of the rain, thank tou for your rainy day haiku.


    • Pollycheck
      November 5, 2007
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      Susie

      Thank you for your comments on my rainy day haiku. As usual another fun contest that you have hosted.

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