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[ the intense emotions within my soul ]

the intense emotions within my soul
light beaming through the clouds
hitting my pale skin

basking in the sun
i wait for you to come
a butterfly landed upon my shoulder
such a fragile creator
yet signifies much more
the beauty and good fortune of life

dust floating through the air and
flitering in the sun
falling ever so slowly, pinging into my eyes
swelling with a tear built up inside
i rub my eyes to free it
slightly irritated i squint
faintly seeing an outline of your body

your long blonde hair flowing
in the wind
the curves of your body stand out
as your back is to the sun

softly your voice is calling to me
to lift my head and to join you
with shaky knees i stand
squabbling over to you
i fall to your feet
looking up to you like a cherub
sent to me from above

such amazing beauty
more beautiful than any butterfly
i have ever seen

you were sent to save my soul
save it from eternal damnation
the damnation of becoming a
part of a society which is
looked upon with scorn...


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well this is just some stuff...havent wrote in a long long long time and this is just an attempt i guess

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  • a means to an end
    May 20, 2008

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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww :'( that is so fucking sweet. who knew you were a poet at heart *sobbs* so fucking awesome Wahhhhhhhhhhh


  • BeautifulChaos44
    November 4, 2007

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    omg rachel....i dont know what to think. this is beautiful. jus wow.....
    i didnt know you thought of me like THAT... that makes me happy.