Children are so Beauiful.
They are real Miracles,
Miracles given by God.
God the Maker,
The Creator.
The One Above.
The one who is keeping,
The World on Course.
Children are Miracles,
Miracles given to US.
Just like Jesus,
From the Lord above.
But are we bringing them,
To a World of Joy
To a World were their Futures,
Shall go on and on.
When you look out at Nature.
Look at the Damage We've Done.
Are We giving our Children,
A World full of Joy.
They see the Wars,
They see the damage done,
Are we going to leave them,
A World full of Joy
It makes you wonder,
Why we are keep breeding,
The Way that we Do.
We need them,
But Right now they need US.
As one day they will have to,
Live and Breathe and be in charge,
Of Mother Earth
Are we moving too quick,
That our minds are too quick,
To think What Do Our Children Need.
To help them be in control One Day.
As most of all they need Peace Within,
OUR WORLD TODAY
A contest entry
- Love comes in all Ages by Loveandblessings2u.
950 points, ended November 12, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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a strong verdict of Love and War and our children are our world of our troubles and our love. Hopefully this war we are in is about to end and we can keep our children close by at home. Mother nature is another issue for have let it go to waste and cut down way too many trees.
your poem was nystalgis in form and the meter was smooth
I like your point of Love and children
keep writing till your pen runs dry
you have a great knack when poetry is the subject
Love Tamara
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I do agree that todays world is a big mess, with lots of problems, it can even be a scarey place to live at times.
But we can't just give up on hope, we can't run and hide our children. We can't stop having children, we need them to make the world a better place.
I believe if we protect them the best we can and bring them up right, then we have hope for a better tomorrow.
You wrote a great piece here, your message is one that all should read.
Thanks for entering my contest and good luck.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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