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Living Life Like A dream

When you finally achieve, and you begin to believe
When you see the light, and free yourself from plight
When you discover the light, and you decide to fight
When you stop drifting and you start moving
The day you finally realize, when your hopes finally materialize
Once you grow from small seed, to tree, and you finally see…
You begin to live life like a dream
You relax; your power has reached beyond max
You become lighter, a triumphant fighter
You become care free, you can finally see
You have become who you have wanted to be
You live with no fear and worry
Never giving up you tell your story
Always getting up when you’re knocked down
Pursuing your hopes and dreams
Never loosing hope, you keep moving forward

Because when you finally reach the stage of such power,
When you finally learn to live life like a dream…

Life becomes better, for ever and ever
You get everything you want, just by thought
The limits of others are not for you
You pursue, and do what you do
And you never lose and you never fail
Your soul and heart begin to sail
When you live life like a dream
It may seem, that you are King
Because you will find love, and happiness
And no matter what, no matter who shouts
Things will always work out
Life becomes fun and carefree
You see all there is to see
You can be what you wish to be
You are free

Once you live life like a dream
Your life becomes a dream

Live life like a dream today, and you will never want to live any other way




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Please head my lecture, live life like a dream and everything will become better, for ever and ever.

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  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    November 5, 2007

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    It's great to see a positive poem. There are always so many of the other kind. There's a place for venting, but there's also a place for celebrating. Life isn't all bad, after all. Agreed whole-heartedly with everything here. The only line I might take exception to is "And you never lose and you never fail" because unhappy and/or poor people labor under the delusion that happy and/or rich people never fail when the truth is they fail more often than those who never try anything. They just fail upward, while those who don't accomplish anything in life are paralyzed by fear of failure. For instance, Hank Aaron (former baseball home run record holder) actually struck out more times than he hit home runs, but nobody remembers him for that. And everyone knows the story of Edison trying over 1000 unsuccessful variations of the light bulb before he found the one that worked and made him a gazillionaire. He just kept failing upward.

    Sorry for the rant but your poem inspired it so don't blame me. haha

    Take care,

    Mark Rickerby

    • MasterReaper
      November 5, 2007
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      Well think about it Hank Aaron, and Edison succeded in the end. You only fail when you give up. I meant that you can never fail as long as you never give up.