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[ No dread fills ]

No dread fills
This empty heart

Ad men fall away
At heel

The fact that we
Are not all equal

Has kept me
On an even keel

And, I feel,
A trivial fact

Has crossed my mind
This afternoon

And that is that
The month of may

Comes just before
The month of June

Should we need
Further legislation

Like how to read
The fear we write

Just switch on the box
And have a listen

They'll get it straight
For you tonight

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  • luvdrkchocolate
    November 4, 2007

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    Oh. This is an interestion poem that you have written in here. I like the quiwikiness of this and that way that you worded it. Some of it I felt like I completely understood and other parts I wasn't really sure of but I did have fun in reading it. I liked how you played with the language. I don't really know about titles for this though. I have troubles with titles for my poems too. lol