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sloppy seconds

its not that he left me
its not that you betrayed me
im better than the both of you

it amuses me to think that i wasted my time
how i spent any of it on you
you both deserve eachother
tell me how do my left overs taste

i dont care that my heart was broke
i lost my boyfriend
i lost my bestfriend

it doesnt matter that you fucked him
i dont even care if youre a slut
or that he cheated on me with you
all the promises that you both made

do you wonder if hes thinking of me
when hes fucking you 
your cheap and disgusting
how do you enjoy sloppy seconds

i had him first and gave it better
i rocked his world and blew his mind
but your begging him and your desperate
a whore selling to the lowest bidder

when you sucked his cock
how did my left overs taste

you thought you were the shit
taking him from me
you should have known better
when he walked out your door

he told all our friends about you
when you come around
everyone stares and laughs at you
they all know what you are

did he come back asking for more
do you hide your face
looking back in shame
how do my left overs taste

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boyfriend and bestfriend backstabbers

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  • Mandee K. Martyn
    November 8, 2007

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    oh hell yeah! This poem is the best revenge poems. I know how to be on the sucky end of the whole deal. This poem make me smile a lot.


  • Tarja
    November 4, 2007

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    Wow... this was so dramatic and full of emotion. I think you did a lovely job with this piece. It obviously could use minor touch ups as far as word choice goes... but other than that this was wonderful. Great job.