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my friends(

Everyones bitching
behind everyones back,
we all know what happens,
we all see the attacks.

The unwritten rules
are bent out of shape,
all known bitchy limits
seem to have escaped.

At first I could deal,
it wasn't so bad,
but things got so much worse,
and now everyones mad.

I have to get out now,
my patience is thin,
I've dealt for so long,
its worn down my skin.

Its getting so tence now,
Im starting to crack,
I can feel myself breaking,
Im ready to snap.

I try to escape
but they make it so hard,
I just want some peace
but they have no regard.

Invisable when im there,
essential when I go,
all I want is happiness,
but thats alot to ask, I know.

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  • cupcakecultx33
    November 17, 2007
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    Great job. I love all of your poems

  • lilAj
    November 4, 2007
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    nice write! the flow was smooth and it held me to the very last word