childhood memories:
sunday afternoons,
riding with Dad on his bike
- no seat for the dog.
Author notes
Picture inspiration - 15 words!
I don't know if you've noticed, but it is actually a Senryu (the last three lines). The Senryu is an explanation of the two words in the first line. As I needed 15 words for this contest poem ... lol.
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Brings back Memories
Your words are fresh and bring to my mind visions of the innocent pleasures of family & friends, (man & beast!)
I enjoyed this read. You have a way with the economy of words--which I admire and would like to be more disciplined in this way.
Best of luck,
David
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Actually, first thing that came into my mind was in fact that it is a Senryu
(except first line then, but that's some kind of intro to the form)
Ah, those childhood memories
if only we could turn back time to relive all these beautiful moments
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Simplistic and comforting ~ a lovely piece... x
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Anna you seem to have cracked these short poem contests Always the right words I love the way you manage to slip in a final line that really wraps everything up perfect
Excellent
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Thank you Legend. I don't know if you've noticed, but it is actually a Senryu (the last three lines). The Senryu is an explanation of the two words in the first line. As I needed 15 words for this contest poem ...
I forgot to mention this in my Author Notes. 
Anna.
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