As a silent angel
Awaits a love so true
So perfect and sincere
She's waiting for you.
An angel of beauty
That can petrify
With one gentle touch
Or blink of an eye.
An angel awaits
A man whose heart
Has fumbled through the darkness
And tempted all fates.
Author notes
Pic Prompt #1
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A contest entry
- Pic Inspired [3 options] Come on in!!!! by Poetic-Theorem.
950 points, ended November 15, 2007, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Beautiful Lady by Liquid memories.
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Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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beautiful
your words made this poem come to life
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Wow i loved this this was deep and so sincere
This one sure came from the heart.
I love this poem your words.
Thank you for sharing
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WONDERFUL!
Beautiful take on the picture prompt. Soft, elegant amd simple words that brings the picture alive. The entire poem is great...I love the second stanza the most...
" An angel of beauty
That can petrify
With one gentle touch
Or blink of an eye."
Very Well Penned!
Thank you very much for your entry!
I wish you the very best in the contest!
David
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awesome
simple but beautiful.
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Very nice very nice.
I like your take on the pic.
I really enjoy picture prompts and you did a great job with this very nice. Best wishes to you in the contest
Delila
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great write
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A beautifully written poem. I'm a sucker for angel poems though. LOL! This one is just simply beautiful though. Keep it up!
~Donna~ -
well done with an essense of love and hope. many blessings always xxx
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oh how very sweet this is a lovely poem.
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