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*~ Chased Shadows of Wishes ~*

Missing image

 

 

 

 

Limbs longed to stretch and tap dance
on Elysium Fields,  feel empathy
through delicate soil,  sadness-happiness
tickle toes as constant reminder
of why I'm still alive.

The windows of opportunity
beckoned Spirit,  brought self to Start
and allowed the games to begin.

Ivory flag drawn,  not in defeat
but opened gates to Go~

I chased shadows of wishes,  waited
for more to fall before my feet,
prayed this time,  they would stay
just a little bit longer.

A path of Light led my inner child
somewhere over the rainbow.

What a wonderful world~

Shaped aspirations showered like rain
for hands to grasp,  grip with all might
around sides so images remain;
does not slip through fingers.

Dreams did not crash but called out,
[ Catch me if you can ]


Strides I made to make it across
with Light as my guide to get
a glimpse of glitter.

Only time~
the infinite initiator stopped counting.

Gave me back moments
what I thought were lost
yet regret never regained momentum.

Heard my name mentioned,  whispers
[Your song]

as laughter lingered for miles
on threads sewn,  love lines dropped
for me to hold onto.




Author notes

Username: Desire
Chose Picture Option

Some Spiritual Inspiration
which sparked this write:

[Stay]:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m0IB9lfVEo4
[What a Wonderful World]
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c5IIXeR5OUI
[Only Time]:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qcQ2Ttd3i_Q
[Your Song]:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QegFYgBnJJw

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  • poet2angels gold member
    November 12, 2007

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    So wonderful this is! A work of art from start to finish! TY for entering and sharing this beauty!
    Lynda


  • Amera gold member
    November 6, 2007

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    As always your imagery is fantastic and is vivid in the reader's mind. I love the part about giving back lost moments. Well done!

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Errant Panther gold member
    November 5, 2007

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    Lovely interpretation of the picture prompt, and a very nice background choice to accompany it. vivid imagery and elegant language to carry the reader into the tale. well done and best wishes.


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    November 5, 2007

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    You have done such a wonderful job on this piece hun... I feel that this will be up there with the finalists of any contest... you capture so beautifully such emotion and imagery

    Karen


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    November 5, 2007

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    BREATH TAKING

    I just love how your words make me feel...This is wonderfully written and makes me stop to think and feel the thoughts flowing inside of me*hug*

    Winner all the way*rose* Niaish my sister for sharing your beautiful heart with me*hug**rose**hug*


  • HaleyMary
    November 4, 2007

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    Beautiful write. I liked the part of moments the best. I think sometimes after some time has passed in life, it can sometimes seem like some things are lost in life, but if we are able to have memories of the past, it can feel that somehow those moments can still exist, even if just in our minds. Good luck in the contest.


  • penman gold member
    November 4, 2007

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    Powerful

    Incredible poem sweetness. Such images rivet the heart and soul. Pure magic and such a masterpiece. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Errant Panther gold member
    November 4, 2007
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    Simply elegant, very nice flow and soothing dream like mood. great write and best wishes to you.


  • StarEyes
    November 4, 2007

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    This is beautiful!! For some reason, I found much peace as I read this one!! Not sure why, but yet I did!! You did a fantastic job on this one!! I love it!!

    Best of luck in this contest!!

    and love

    Nettie

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