Moves like Red
Summer passes by
Moving into fall
The leaves change
Moving like red
Winter comes
Red moving along
My pale cheeks
The spring flowers grow
Moving like red
adorning the craggy path
Red moving under my skin
Through my veins
Pumping harder,red
Life moves like red
A contest entry
- moves like red by Cat.
650 points, ended November 11, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is a really nice take on the contest, lovely imagery...
thanks for entering it here
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Thank you! ^_^
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so many fine examples of moving like red- thank you for changing this color too.. much better..
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yeah the color change was needed...Thanks!
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loved it
great imagery. but then i am also a blood watcher
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Thank you so much!
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wow
such a wonderful take...love the poem a lot..All the best!
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aww yeah I just tried picturing red moving and the feeling of it. It all worked out in the end to make a pretty good poem.
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You did great....
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Awwww my rose, bleeding beautifully so sweet and amazing here as always, beverly the flower
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aww Thanks Antonio the Blossom! I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you for your support!
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hey, do me a favor and pick a better background- thanks
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