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the cloudburst






the cloudburst
splashing his boots
a snail





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  • Seeking Peace silver member
    November 7, 2007

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    Snails, one of my favourite rainy day things... beautiful and something totally different to the others I have read, goodluck in the contest

    Karen


  • azure85 gold member
    November 4, 2007
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    the cloudburst
    splashing his boots
    a snail

    Oh my, a rainy day haiku-one that boys love! The snails and slugs always come up when it is soaked below, great set of images in this one. I shall be a snail, and keep on splashing today! Thank you for a great haiku.