Knew how special you are from the first moment
never a doubt that crossed this mind,
our souls connected across space and time,
as word by word and line by line,
we blend together and merge immortal.
A first touch of lips that rocketed
impulses throughout the universe,
blazing you across the network of me,
a collaboration written in the stars,
set in gravity our trust and faith.
A journey of discovery eternally ours,
whispers serenity in languid sands,
that bond creating a union of being,
a living dream we pursue and breath,
to answer this call of destiny.
Your yellow heart encircled in the steel of me,
blissfully charged in the grandeur of belief,
tantalyzing embraces completing passion,
as cravings reverberate find safety in home,
riding the crescendo of love into oblivion.
Author notes
"Lovers don't finally meet somewhere. They're in each other all along." ...Rumi
image: "Soulmates - Gray Wolves" by Larry Fanning
A contest entry
- Lovers... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended November 6, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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as cravings reverberate find safety in home,
riding the crescendo of love into oblivion.
The immagery is strongly knitted and love is around
the verse which is indeed very intriguing as
well..thanks for the beautiful entry in my contest...
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such wondrous love reigns from your heart and illuminates every fiber of your being. well done xxx many loving blessings always xxx
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This is so beautiful and heartfelt. Deep emotoins seep through your words, touching ones soul.
Soft smooth flow of calmning love and peace.
Exceelnt work.
Best to you!
Love
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