as the sun sets
reach for me
under the stars
as our celestial
bodies come together
i am earth
you are wind
let your lips
caress my body
tantalize me
caress my soul
as you have
done for an
eternity
since the dawn
of time
there has been no other
“ we never met
were in each
other all this time”
we were ordained
to become soul mates
my heart knows no other
you love me
even when your not near me
A contest entry
- Lovers... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended November 6, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A Wondrous Expression of Love
Oh Sie' this is a gold...Your words..are so understood by those who know this realm...and you and I do....This is wondrous... and dramatic, passionate, spiritual, eternal! I will always be glad I read this, and I will read it again and again...Magnificently Love!
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we were ordained
to become soul mates
my heart knows no other
you love me
even when your not near me
A defination of the universal love is around the verse and very intriguing as well..thanks for the beautiful entry in my contest...
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Perfect...as always. Never can get enough of yours, sweets.
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Fantastic!
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Simply beautiful poetry here...PK
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Beautiful poem, gentle and loving.
So good to read as well
Good luck in the contest
Adrian
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Beautiful words again from your tender heart. It is true that love can devour the distance between two who are meant to be.
“ we never met
were in each
other all this time”
we were ordained
to become soul mates
my heart knows no other
you love me
even when your not near me
these lines reached into my heart
My best wishes to you in this contest.
Take care
Margaret
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Makes me
think, about a curtain person from Alk
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The wind Here
Wow what images this brings to mind, this is so wonderful makes me want to be the wind, and blow across you soul for eternity, wow..................joe
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