The rose garden with its spectrum of color
The Vibrant Defalcate Rose, with its slander silky pedals
Conveys a smoothing feel and unexpected altitudes
Camaraderie the starting point of any liaison
Where there is expectation, integrity, and conviction
In the meadows of forlorn love where cheerfulness stands unaccompanied
Rose red emotions brim over the bonds of motivation
Where rationale quivers at the prospect of another broken heart
Letting intelligentsia loose, reaching for the Vibrant Defalcate Rose
Which takes audacity to start a life's voyage with an aficionado
One’s heart is amicable, receptive of those whom seek love
Those whose objective differs, whose incentive are not affection
Trepidation overcomes some, while others stand there ground
They who brave the fight seek to facilitate their accolade
Which is the stupefaction and a amalgamation of spirits
Taking control of the apprehension who seeks to control our passion
For some is the biggest confrontation most will ever fight
To stride out of the familiar into a world of apathy
To progress beyond a life stagnant, starting anew an existence with purpose
A union of the Vibrant Defalcate rose, and the Vigorous Spirited Warrior
Battle Won
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Brother
A contest entry
- Become a part of my AP Family :) - PREWRITES ALLOWED by MaMa-2-be-Cindy.
550 points, ended November 30, 2007, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Jo you are the one and only warrior.
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okay I think I have fixed, not sure though, if I havent fixed it what I said below still goes, If I have then YAY YAY YAY
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OMG I accidently removed the poem from the contest I so so so didn't mean to , I am so sorry
Now unfortunatley you can't be on the winners list but I will be making a special note in the winners announcement for it and I would be honoured if you would indeed be my AP Brother
Again I am so sorry Joe.
Cindy -
A perfect time to read this I think, as just last night my fiance bought me home a bunch of roses, white pink and red
Definetly some big words, Loved that.
I loved the simplicity of the ending in Battle won, it is all thats needed to be said
Well done and I hope you do become my AP Brother
Cindy
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Love it
Joe, very emotional... very intense... i love it -
very well written
how true of love and the splendor or defeat all of it can be joy and pain for that is life and love awesome job
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What a great read this one is. I love it! You do have a way with words. you know? This is just soooo tender and wonderful!!
Best of luck in this contest!!
my friend
Nyetta
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Thank you Girl
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I enjoyed this write very much. Good luck in this contest.
Lady D
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Wonderfully expressed poem here my friend. Brought a tear to my eye. Good luck in your contest ~Sie
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Thank you Poet
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