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Smile Awhile

Darling, give me one of your precious smiles
That I can tuck deep in my heart
I'll carry it with me across the miles
So we will never be far apart

Darling, give me a hug to take with me
Let it keep me safe always in your arms
Lavish me with kisses so free
To last as I think of your charms

Darling, don't ask to meet me somewhere
I'll be so busy while I'm away
We have all our memories to share
I'll come back to you one day

So, my Darling give me one more smile
For you I have room in my heart
We'll share our time for a long, long, while
Even though we are still apart

 

Now my Darling, my love my own

I am coming back to you

Smile for me as I come home

For you are my loved one true

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 6, 2007
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    Now my Darling, my love my own

    I am coming back to you

    Smile for me as I come home

    For you are my loved one true


    I really love the honesty and simplicity of the loving heart here..well done..and thanks for the sdwonderful entry in my contest....




  • ennovy silver member
    November 4, 2007

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    Katie love this is a very beautiful poem...you have a wonderful talent sort of dipped in the old ways of writing. You do it well with a magical compassion....I loved this read.........novy


    • Katie Lazette
      November 4, 2007
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      Thank you novy for your kind comment. Glad you enjoyed reading my poem. Hope you are feeling better today.


  • CherryOnTop
    November 4, 2007
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    This is beautiful.


  • Oleander
    November 4, 2007
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    Oh, that's absolutely beautiful!


    • Katie Lazette
      November 4, 2007
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      Thank you Moon-Slave for your kind comment. Glad you enjoy my poem.

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