When I step into danger your there to save me.
When I'm lost in thought your there to help me.
When the ocean waves have risen your there to play.
The fun and joy we have together could never be taken away,
Not even if everything changed.
You created a new world for me,
Making it happy and always on its feet.
Among the whole universe,
Your the only true friend I will ever have.
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This is actually kind of a real poem thingy~~! lol iunno I think its kind of like Taylor (LadyAmalthea) to me b/c we had so many good times but of course Ive made it a little untrue!!
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sweet
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show, don't tell.
YOUR: a possessive. ("I like your new skirt.")
YOU'RE: contraction of "you are." ("You're my best friend.")
Yes, there's a difference.
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sweeeetness
AWWW! <3_<3 oh my god I totally adore this and I so need it right now! I feel so loved =D I love you too Ania. Like gaah this is totally how our friendship is, like the complete and utter best. ♥ you are like the best friend I've ever had and inspire everything in the world for me. ^-^ you rock.
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this is sweet
i like it very much
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yes uplifting is the word. i would change the first verse to a big metaphor, it's kinda too plain and sort of ruins the poem with the flow aswell. oh and a simple spelling mistake, when you're talking about someone it's "You're" and "Your" when speaking about something belonging to someone. it's a quite common mistake. good write. i like the colour and the wallpaper, fits nice with the theme! well done ^^
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That's a cute poem, uplifting
I guess we deserve to be happy...
It seems true...
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