Calling your name,
Coming up behind you.
Look around.
Put my arms around you
Kiss beautiful lips
Caught by surprise
Draw you tight to me
Whisper my love
Turning around
Just to be bound
In ardent embrace
Kiss on the face
Soft breasts against my chest
Taking away my breath
Arms get tighter
Face lifting higher
Soft lips parting
Tongue darting
Eyes misting
Ready for kissing
More soft love words
Maybe not even heard
Melt into my arms
World goes dim
See none but you
Looking at me
In your eyes I swim
Lips softly touch
Like a shock all thru
Oh how I do
So very much love you
Author notes
This applies to....someone....somewhere....
Used the pic at top of page....DERN....gotta upgrade membership...
OH...nothing in the title is misspelled...
A contest entry
- Let Me Feel Romanced by stavykm.
800 points, ended November 14, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Your honest opinions please..
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She will cherish this one.
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Excellent Write
Very beautiful of a write. Thank you I enjoyed it very much. Romantic indeed! I love the title My Love Sensations and the first line Calling your name and the last line so very much love you. The title first and last lines embrace this poem beautifully! Parts of this poem reminds me of the book Song of Solomons. You only mispelled sensations and I don't grade that way, so don't even worry about it, OK. Thank you and best of luck in the contest. Blessings Kelle Marie, stavykm and Christina
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Still Guilty
Bout th, time ya give this-un ta that thar gal o yorn, she ought be a washin yer socks in no time.
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Sinsations. LOL Yep, I see nothing is misspelled for you meant it to be that way. But are these feelings to be sin? How can love ever be a sin? A beautiful romantic, sensuous written poem. Your emotions speak loudly within this poem of your love for her. She must be some humdinger of a woman.
Good luck in the ocntest. 
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Great job, nice poem it's riveting absolutely romantic
Excellent Poem Gramps
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wonderful job on this piece. Had a wasy flow until the last part of it. The rhyme was perfect until the end and you went elsewhere. A little dusting my friend and this would be a awesome piece.
Sinsations....thoughts of th emind previal sometimes. nothing wrong with it.
I am sure she will love this when she reads it.
Best wishes,
Tory
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