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I love him

I love him,
Really love him

I never gave up
Never stopped saying sup?

Couldnt take my eyes off him
Couldnt stop seeing his smile

I made him laugh all day
I know i have my ways

I love him, never dissed him
He is such a cute boy.

This poem could go on forever
I wish i couldnt say never

Now we love each other
Thanks to my mother

We are happy together
he says goodbye to Heather

Gotta go now
I gotta go see him smile

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  • Xrevenge
    November 11, 2007

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    ...good..but

    Listen...I'm like twelve...IDK if I'm older than you or not...but take this little piece of advice? Love, is really never what it seems, and this boy may be great...but I made that mistake. Now I am like, with my like soulmate and we're going to be together forver...I just want you to have a happy ever after like me......I don't mean to intrude but I wantd to tell you love is a tricky game...you have to learn to play before you can win....I am here if you'd like to talk ...or anything....bye...