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**Dew Drop Falls**
The Dew delicately clings to the Petal, not ever wanting to part. The drop to the ground would shatter their precious souls. The strong love between the two, is only a mere existence, but never ending and relived. © Cara L. Greenlee, All rights reserved Nov 4 7:50 AM 2007. http://allpoetry.com/poem/3572844
The love you have for someone is never ending even though at times you part. A metaphoric write
The dew drops hath
embraced upon the petals,
not ever wanting to leave.
The drop to the ground
would shatter their
precious souls.
To death they would
hath to part.
But the love never ending,
and will be reborn.
old version
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A contest entry
- Early Bird Quickie 10/10L/30m by poet2angels.
475 points, ended November 4, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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Love It!
metaphorical. that really works
I guess the image used helps too:-P
I love metaphores, and any kinda of literary techniques. I'm a sucker for that.
And what you express here is really beautiful and true.
curious.... is that a picture you took or someone else's
P.S the old version is very nice too :-)
Thank you for entering.
Best,
Albasoul
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Beautiful and visual. Well done.
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Nice one Babe. Great metaphoric write Good luck in the contest . Your getting better day by day.
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The imagery within your words matches so perfectly with the picture. I feel as well as see the dew clinging to petals just as we cling to each other, never wanting to part. Best wishes to you in this contest.
Margaret
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I see you have been experimenting. Impressive poetry as usual. You capture the cycle of nature in such a concise method. At times I feel insignificant when I read your poems. Well done!
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so lovely...
beautiful pic and your insight and beautiful poem are just lovely!
Great job. Congrats on the tin...well done!
Blessings! Tammy
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What's with the haths?? Very Shakespearean!!
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OOooo, Thats a DEEP one granbaby..don bus thet skull o yer'n.....
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Beautifully written and the prompt expressed so well!
Lynda
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well done and it encapsulates a true essence of love and sadness in your words. many blessings always xxx
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