Dawn's breath upon life's face
seems reminiscent to that
of a baroque prisoner
held captive amid the glistening dew
Solemn, yet not tainted
free to drift on the tide of change
to reach, to inspire, to touch the heart
of a soul in desperate need of comfort
walk into its embrace without calloused hands
and trust that love will abide in no forged mould.
Author notes
prompt: to write a poem where love and nature are intertwined or image on contest page for same.
A contest entry
- Early Bird Quickie 10/10L/30m by poet2angels.
475 points, ended November 4, 2007, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Detailed critique welcome
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Great
Good write and imagery. I like "free to drift on the tide of change
to reach, to inspire, to touch the heart
of a soul in desperate need of comfort"
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congrats on the silver xx
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thank you, glad you enjoyed the read.
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WOW
This is truly amazing and filled with emotion...I really love this...
Lynda
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well done my dear friend. The entire 2nd stanza brought me to tears - such love and beauty illuminating from your spirit- many blessings always xxx
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prompt is:
I want you to write a poem where love and nature are intertwined♥
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use the pic above for inspiration to create the same...
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