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For You Are My Sunshine

Sunshine hear me calling in the wind 
Your name a rose upon my lips
Floral fragrance rosy cheeks
Moonlight above eclipse
As I kiss your lovely lips

Your hands entangle with my soft hair
The stars above like candles shine
I'm the flower who needs life
So supple sweet divine
And you who are my sunshine

You brush your warm hand upon my face
Like the rain that falls so gently
In breaths life on to my lips
And sets my spirit free
Then lifts me up so gently

Author notes

this peom was inspired by the prompt but also the songs:
Aquarious/Let The Sun Shine by the fifth demetion
Golden Slumbers by the beatles
Roses I Send To You (a song i sang in choir but i can not remember the name of the composer or writer)

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  • poet2angels gold member
    November 4, 2007
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    SO beautiful this is...Lovely sounds of love

    Lynda


  • Stardust-luvr
    November 4, 2007

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    well done with such beauty from your heart - love the line: The stars above like candles shine many blessings always xxx best wishes

    Just an FYI in stanza 3 line 1 it should be warm hand not worm hand


  • poet2angels gold member
    November 4, 2007

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    prompt is:

    I want you to write a poem where love and nature are intertwined♥
    or
    use the pic above for inspiration to create the same...



    • iamthebeatles
      November 4, 2007
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      thanks

      thanks so much for the beautiful prompt, hope you like what i came up with
      *peace*