Drip my love in tongues of sunshine,
petals scenting crystal orbs of capsuled wishes,
drawing feather's fragile, quilling fingers
laced to linger in cascading dreams, our awakening wind, murmuring music.
In raising eastern wing above all fear, to soar your holiness,
I quench my thirst for watered wilderness, caressing green to marry blue,
as woven blush in flower's mind, spinning shadow's fragrant buzz.
Trust your aching skin to carry, braver blending, as stem to middle;
strumming string to pull, our panting pistil's wilder child, playing innocence.
For I have eyes to bare my heaven, in silhouetted lips to swallow morning.
A contest entry
- Early Bird Quickie 10/10L/30m by poet2angels.
475 points, ended November 4, 2007, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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"petals scenting crystal orbs of capsuled wishes,
drawing feather's fragile, quilling fingers
laced to linger in cascading dreams, our awakening wind, murmuring music."
Excellent penning, Rich. I'd have given you the gold, as well, my dear Friend. Beautifully stated, serene & sensual. Congratulations, Scribe. 
Wanda
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a well deserved gold, for certain - such strong imagery and eloquent language! this is a marvelous composition!
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"For I have eyes to bare my heaven, in silhouetted lips to swallow morning."
Oh, my goodness, this is absolutely gorgeous, a very beautiful poem, very worthy of the gold, congrats!
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congrats on the gold
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Pure Song
quenching drops of sunshine
holds green till married blue
embraces prize of morning eyes
rich gem of turqoise hue
a wilder child of innocence
finds meadow's fragrant ethers
warming dawn and dewborn smiles
in softest touch of feathers
where strums of heart, a garden
paints wilderness and streams
incalescent heaven sings
sweet Rocky Mountain dreams
Beautiful and bookmarked!
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That is truly gorgeous and beautiful. Very long lines though. Maybe you can break it down after the contest ends? Very beautiful, Rich. Very.
~Namita
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This is gorgeous and truly fills my senses this morning with scents and sounds of love...
BEAUTIFUL
Lynda
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well done incredible!!! sure beats mine out of the golden meadow of gentleness many blessings always xxx
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prompt is:
I want you to write a poem where love and nature are intertwined♥
or
use the pic above for inspiration to create the same...
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prompt is:
I want you to write a poem where love and nature are intertwined♥
or
use the pic above for inspiration to create the same...
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prompt is:
I want you to write a poem where love and nature are intertwined♥
or
use the pic above for inspiration to create the same...
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