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Love's Gentleness

Love blossoming in hearts joined true
like Springtime's enchanting rebirth
among meadows, daisies of gold

Crystal dewdrops fall as tears
encapsulate our gentle spirits
reflecting innocence of love

Souls enveloping wholeheartedly
with gleams of prismatic dreams;
glimmers of hope, years yet to embrace

A manifestation of true loving emotions

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  • Errant Panther gold member
    November 4, 2007

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    very nice piece of penning, such a tender tone to this with nice visuals. well done and best wishes to you.


  • poet2angels gold member
    November 4, 2007
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    so lovely and filled with beautiful metaphor
    Excellent poetry


  • kaibab silver member
    November 4, 2007

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    Sweet is poem of spilling love through meadow's open eyes of sunshine...lovely and good luck to you...


  • poet2angels gold member
    November 4, 2007

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    prompt is:

    I want you to write a poem where love and nature are intertwined♥
    or
    use the pic above for inspiration to create the same...