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Beautiful love

I love nature cause she’s beautiful
I love the sun set, the moon and the stars at night
I love the sound of running waters
The waterfall, and the way the sea wave crashes
Love the way the birds fly in the sky
I love it when it rain
Love looking at the white snow from my window

But nothing can compare to the way I love you
you're more pleasant to look at
then the flowers of the field
your bright eyes are lovelier
then the many stars on clear sky
Something about you quench my thirst
quicker then springs of water

Some time I wonder how this came to be
There’s a missing piece to the story
Maybe while I was asleep the lord took my rib
And I think you have it

when I met you it was as love at first sight
when I tried to stop I couldn’t
in your presence my heart melted
your voice is a preferred melody
Then the singing of angels to me
you've become the purpose of my life

I was attracted to you
far before i knew you

I guess it is your beauty

I love your pretty face
I love your luscious lips
I love your delicate skin
I love your firm breast
I love your toned legs

But the love I have fore you
Neither cupid nor afertdidis can understand

I guess its just because you'e beautiful

Yeah it is because you're beautiful

you are more beautiful then that pretty face the sun can deteriorate
More then those luscious lips the winter may chap
More then this delicate skin
That age may ruffin
More then that natural black wooly hair
That time may turn gray
More then those firm breast
That infancy may drop
More the those marble eyes
That can lure to sleep
More then those tone legs
That may be weaken

you are is beautiful indeed

Even if your smile may one day vanish
your knowledge disappear
your wisdom is gone
you will still be beautiful

Because you are who you are

A beautiful creature when God created you
Before you took form
Before he had you in that beautiful package


Forever and always you are beautiful

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  • stavykm gold member
    November 4, 2007

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    Very Nice

    What a beautiful write. You have nature, God and wonderful romantic words to sweep me off of my feet. This is an exclellent write, you captured all the things I asked for here in this write. It reminded me of Songs of Solomon is scripture. Thank you very much a fun read for us to judge, but also for my husband to hear. Blessings, good luck in the contest Kelle Marie, stavykm


  • oceanbubbles
    November 4, 2007

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    ohhhh that was so cute! That was sooo good too. ahhh i fell in love with it! i loved the title so i new i was going to love the poem!!! =) that was brilliant. I lovvvveee everything that you wrote and you gave so pretty images! it was amazzzing. I found like 1 mistake but that was like whatever! well anyway,
    good luck in the contest and I'm sure you'll place!! =) take it from me. So good job. very very good. I think i'm going to give my first EVER applause to you.

    <3


    • volition08
      November 7, 2007
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      your first applause, thank you i appreciate it a lot thankssssss much fore the comments